00:00
00:00
utubedude8245onNG

86 Movie Reviews

32 w/ Responses

A bit of constructive criticism:
The story made sense to an extent
My main problem were small things.
Please color in the mouths. Although you can tell the difference, it just helps in the overall presentation. Watch continuity as well. Nobody likes a sudden irregular white border around the pc unless its being used in some weird 4th wall breaking joke or in some sort of way that makes sense. You can be random, but at the same time, you need to be smart. If you want to work on your animation, I suggest tutorials by Spazkidin3d on YouTube. It really helped with my animation, but do what you wish. I am only suggesting ideas to make you better.

JakesTV responds:

Holy crap i didnt even relize the pc error. I think it may of had to do with the layer it was on -_- I also just found this guy for tutorials on youtube (lilredheadcartoons)

I'm not sure if it was just my computer, but the sound unsynced with the lipsync.
Also, bit of constructive criticism, please watch when zooming out because there was nothing drawn below the belt and that nothing came into frame for a second.

Well animated otherwise!

Dieseling responds:

I always preview my work before I upload it. I noticed the belt thing. Easy fix. Thanks, however the lip sync should just be a little lag problem I think. It happens on some videos for me as well.

lol weird enough to be funny, voice quality was pretty good, i give it 4.5 because, I'm not sure, the way it was animated mixed with the weird (but still fine) story made it almost a bit too weird if you know what I'm getting at. Good job though; if you really like animation, by all means, keep it up. I'm just giving you constructive criticism. :)

haha i couldn't find anything wrong with this. Its short, sweet, well animated, and it made me laugh, so keep it up!!!

lol. that was unexpected!
nice

You know what?
My name is Chris and I don't draw noses on my characters.
Its because I am bad at noses.
If and when I'm as big as Oney, you'll probably be saying the same thing about me.
(Of course, no one can top Oney, not even me.)
lol

Great job man!!
This was both funny and unexpected, and that makes for a great animation!!!

Oponok responds:

Thanks - I've found that I'm at my best when making content that doesn't really fit in a conventional genre. It doesn't always get the hits, but it feels like it gives me my own voice.

This was very well animated and I appreciate the time and effort you put into it.
Watching this makes me want to better myself at 3D-ish in 2D, like what you did with the entire body spinning. Frame by frame is where its at, and...
Just all together nice job.
5 stars because I couldn't find a reason to make it 4.5.

Dude,
I am in your exact position.
Spazkid's tuts are helping my fbf. None of that is on my account currently. My fbf test was blammed, but its still on my youtube, Utubedude8245

:) Nice!!!

I'm a little choked up. Nice one, man!!!

Chris here I am such an animation fanboy The only problem,I'm broke as hell right now Soon I'll have the necessary enough tools to better myself Thnx Spazkid for the tutorials and the inspiration to keep going 2 epic animated series are coming... Getready

UTDNG @utubedude8245onNG

Age 29, Male

Joined on 8/14/11

Level:
5
Exp Points:
260 / 280
Exp Rank:
> 100,000
Vote Power:
4.45 votes
Rank:
Town Watch
Global Rank:
65,953
Blams:
0
Saves:
110
B/P Bonus:
2%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
30